individual tutorial

how should i add the questionnaire data i collected?
definitely the best idea to include the results (quotes/odd stat within text instead of separate data section as this will back up point i am making and save me from repeating myself.

how i can use survey information
the qualitative information (statements/quotes) - anonymised
as i start to make statements about the value of em[pathetic or shock - for e.g i could say , feedback received from questionnaires on the examples used showed this, this and this however some people felt that this this and this ......

use it in the same way you would us quotes and references from a text.

'i would go down the route of using the qualitative feedback in response to the feedback...personally i wouldn't go down the statistically route as this will become a significant part..a lot to do for a small point/information'

document all results on blog - so then if i find it is relevant to include more of the feedback i can have it as a appendices.

i could include the questionnaire itself in the appendices so i don't have to keep referring to the questions- i can just refer to question one or 2 on the 'questionnaire appendix 1'

i mentioned to Fred how i feel though i have wrote the basis of 2 sections of my dissertation, i don't feel i have quite yet started to write about my 'theme'/ point of my dissertation question which is empathy so feel like I'm not really progressing.
however Fred reassured me that the points i am making now are the things i just need to get done to set the context of everything else i want to say - i am proving that i know 'stuff', and that all i am going to say in the next part is based on the fact i know this and have found this out - this is the research and these are the references - the first 3rd can be very much about setting the context.
bare in mind the person reading it doesn't know anything about my topic- so take it from the point of view that whoever reading it needs to be informed about the subject.
the next stage is showing how this idea is related to empathy,  how  we develop emotional links with campaign etc.

take this question as a check and balance when i go through diss- 'SO WHAT' - if I've made and point and proved it i can move on - if i haven't, i cant.

my writing so far is written in a very intuitive way

next tutorial - refine 3000 words i already have, so i can put it to bed and move on.

the the next two weeks - make the transition to next stage talking about empathy.

practical side:
photographs from stages of his life - ask him about these times in he's life - weather they be good or bad - though the photographs may look happy the feeling behind them may not be 0 this will be shown through quotes.

could just focus on this one interviewer if i get enough scope for to document he's journey.
- or could arrange another interview if i get informed by what he tells me from first interview and need to find out more about specific thing - may have to keep an ongoing dialogue.

proving more difficult to find people i can talk to about personal stories

in making the interview questions very specific there a danger to loose personal side, especially if i am interview a number of individuals about there life - maybe one person will be more substanical in making the information/journeys i convey more personal and detailed.
let them tell me what they won't to tell me. rather then just what i am asking

consider looking at organ donation from another persons point of view is very much involved with the issue but is not necessarily the patient - nurses and doctors.
- a issue which has been raised is that people are weary to trust the medical practitioners as some people has mistrust in them that they will favour certain people or not try as hard to save your life if they want your organs. could work at creating practical responses showing how doctors and nurses are people with emotions too and organ donation from there perspective.

casualty department
nurses on wards
surgeon

need to take the ethics checklist with me

in general 
make sure to think realistically about work load- it could be that using one person is enough to show idea and message.
it might be that i extend this practical for my extended practice FMP - COP could be just focusing on indivual, the hospital interviews and stories could be a project for FMP