peer review 19th nov

Comment on the initial relationship between the  theme and the proposed subject
 strengths
 clear link between the theme and the subject  turning it into a personal story is good idea, brings the theme and subject together really well.

 Good and relevant theme to the subject
 story aspect really works with  the vibe your claim for

 comment on the appropriateness, scope and ambition of the  proposed outcome in  relation to the subject
 strengths
 clear outcomes. Could work well in bringing awareness to organ donation.

 series of prints will complement each other and will link together well especially where you can see them altogether in a sequence.

 suggestions
 context, how and where are people going to see it? Will it become part of an existing campaign?

 girl big, it makes the impact greater
 saying that, really small and integrate will give a more intimate vibe.

 comment on the visual investigation development of ideas in response  to the theme and subject?
 Strengths
 obviously a lot of research. Very personal and emotive. Strong concept appearing- the link between his passion and the revealing of the  transplant subject is beautiful.

 great  use of layering
  translate idea effectively
 great  technical drawing that span  different scopes,  atonomy, map drawings.
 suggestions
 really nice images how are they going to work together?
 Is there a narrative?

 Common in the choice of media – format – series etc. In relation to the outcomes?
 Strengths
really like the maps and paper cut and overlaying them. awesome idea
 how many photos are you going to keep? As someone going to be drawn?
 very appropriate for what you want to achieve
 you've  nailed the digital and analogue balance  and the work you are producing reflects such a high standard of professionalism.
 Which leads onto that aspect  of tackling the subject effectively  you're doing on something  very serious and your style and way of working reflects that.

 Suggestions
 keep pushing on a map ideas- in what other ways can  his running be link to his transplant?

 general comment
 really like the imagery and ideas in this.
 keeps the type playful
. Could it fit in with the maps?
 Definitely hand drawn if possible

 a mixture of techniques could work really well. I'm honestly liking of images so far.

 format – either really big of really small – don't go in between, experiment first with size and see/ ask how people feel when looking at it.
 development- I really like the baby and lung one think it translates well.
  it would be interesting  these developed further or even combined.

 Quotes- the work produced focused on a layering kind of style, maybe play around in similar fashion with the quotes within the prints.

 – if you have time small but could be effective
- concertina fold would work well especially with conveying the story/journey.


my comments: 
need to consider presentation and delivery of resolutions-  prints delivered in a hospital envelope?
 Prince displayed in a charity exhibition in Cockermouth  Gallery?