More pages to avoid complication

2 or 3 points in each.

foil name on front page

adding a qr code to link to organ donation site

comment on rhe appropiatness, scope and ambition of the proposed outcomes in realtion to the subject

strenghts:

i like the idea of

suggestions

 you should propose to do an exhibition of your work at the st georges crypt or at the hospital he had hes operation. 

what scale will the book be?

fold out map/flaps etc might bring story alive

could be pritn and a book as your product 

comment on the quality and quantity of visuals investigation and development of ideas in response to the theme and subject.

i just think you need to execute it now

comment on the documentation for the conceptual and practical development of the work evidenced of the blog

are you going to use the drawing of the man behind the bars of his heart? it is so powerful to look at . could this be the starting of the book. then it tells the story.

comment on the decision regarding the production and proposal of outcomes

i think you should stick with hand drawn type not computer.

you could document how you are going to produce book.

general comment:

i thnk the format you are working in will be really effective in your book- make it interactive. 

8th jan- resolved practical 10-2

getting feedback on exactly what you are going to submit

summative 250 words - how theoretical and practical elements of the project have been synthesised together.  - last post on blog 

14th - submit.

pdf of cop blog - final images on issuu, key devel peices. 

practical

2 bound dissertations.