key pointers:
liked the technique of using block areas of white to represent the shape of the clothes-as including clothes would set them apart from each other
how i will capitalise on the feedback - i will carry on and develop on this technique as i think it implies the women are equal with no objectification or judgments to be made on there bodies appearance. this also will work if i give them similar facial expressions so none can read into their mood or persona either.
by just presenting the heads shows them as empowered and easy recognisable- my opinion on the subject matter comes through strongly.
good for someone to see who does not recognise all of the woman- everyone will recognise at least one and can then research into others through curiosity since i am suggesting they are of equal significance.
i could maybe include woman that i did not know about until researching into them for this project, in the hope that other people also are not familiar with them and there significance, hopefully this will make my work more engaging and interesting to look into.
small use of colour around the head looks really good (rosa parks drawing)-makes them stand out by contrast-kind of like their glowing.
could experiment with 3d lines to give the impression of rocks if i was to go forward with mount Rushmore idea.
try my ideas out visually before ruling them out.
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